Not my kind of game, the writing could use a bit of work (personally i didn't care much about Kevin), but the description from the mosaics was very funny. I suggest you're careful with the names, it's quite easy to lose track of all the people if they get introduced too quickly and with not enough care, though you did pretty good in that sense anyway, i've seen way worse.Introducing people slowly is the call.
Definitely a really fun read / play. It did grip me but had me feeling that this was gonna stay in a realm of rational outcome. Really good palette cleanser imo.
There's a lot of media literacy here that I may have to pick up on, however. But I suppose that is the aim of any good work of art.
This was very fun; I enjoyed the way the mystery unfolded!
(I ran into one issue--on the screen with "kevin uses the number 21 a lot don't you think?" there aren't any links to proceed, so I just had to use the "back" arrow.)
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Not my kind of game, the writing could use a bit of work (personally i didn't care much about Kevin), but the description from the mosaics was very funny. I suggest you're careful with the names, it's quite easy to lose track of all the people if they get introduced too quickly and with not enough care, though you did pretty good in that sense anyway, i've seen way worse.Introducing people slowly is the call.
Thanks for playing! I'll keep an eye on info-dumping next time, thanks so much for the feedback and support.
This was such a fun mystery! You did an amazing job of weaving the story together.
Thank you for your kind words and thank you for playing!
HA! Another suspicious mystery lover! I would have tried to become friend with Kevin too xD
It was fun chatting with the colleagues and trying to find Kevin from Finance!
Thanks so much for playing! Happy you enjoyed it!
I'm looking for a man in finance. Trust fund. 6' 5. Blue eyes. Finance. Trust fund. 6' 5. Blue eyes.
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Definitely a really fun read / play. It did grip me but had me feeling that this was gonna stay in a realm of rational outcome. Really good palette cleanser imo.
There's a lot of media literacy here that I may have to pick up on, however. But I suppose that is the aim of any good work of art.
Thank you for playing! I'm glad that I was able to set things up properly, and thanks so much for your feedback!
This was very fun; I enjoyed the way the mystery unfolded!
(I ran into one issue--on the screen with "kevin uses the number 21 a lot don't you think?" there aren't any links to proceed, so I just had to use the "back" arrow.)
Thanks so much for your support, glad you enjoyed it! (And thanks for flagging that!)